comment 2 Cycle 2 Week 8

god job and good job answering the questions but add more infoemation

Cycle 2 week 8

Nice job and good information and alot of details and you answerd the all the qwestions.

Cycle 2 Week 8

Using technology as a student helped me become a better writer. This blogging we do in class makes me think alot when we are writing eassays and stuff like that. I think i did good on my blogs i could of answer some of them better though. All i need to do to do better on my blogs is to read the questions correctly and think good so i can answer the question right. What i did well was reading the question to my best ability for me to understand it. Also going back to my notes so i can get the answer to the question. What i could have done better was read the question more correctly to get a good answer. i could have also think about my questions more better to. What i would like to do for bloggin in the futer is have it for the fun of it and make my own speacial kind of blog with alot of my information on it. Using technology help me as a student become a better write and better thinker to.

Comment 2 (nala)

good details and i like how you explained the bridge and were it was from and all that good details nice job

comment 1 (imani)

good job imani i like all the details that you gave about the bridge you had choosw

Cycle2 week 7

The peerson company who enginerd the bridge was Lamberton and the bridge name is The Golden Gate. The location of the bridge is in Sanfransico/Ca/Usa. The type of bridge is a Supention bridge. The length of the bridge is 4,200ft. Unlike other bridges Golden date has been painted orange a.k.a International orange. That is the name of the bridge in the information of the bridge i had choosen.

Comment 2 ( Jahliah ) week 6

you were very detailed about your engineering and i like how you have inshight in your paragrph so ( Great Job )

Commeenet 1 ( Imani ) week 6

I like how you gave details about what you would like to do and how you explain what engineers do ( Good Job )

Cycle 2 Week 6

The things that engineering are involved in are computers, helping others, and helping the environments. They do alot of different things in the egineering world. They like to help people with there lifes so they can help make there life better than what it is. They also like to help make an better enviornment very better and safe. They mostly like to keep the enivironment clean and not dirty they dont like people littering because that make bad air population as people say.
The career i would like to do is making electronincs. That sounds like fun to do and make at the moment. It is also for people to use and have fun with when ever they want to use the object. I also want to do this egineering because i want to beable to make somthing new and interesting so it can be one of the best things out there in the world. That is why i want to be apart of this engineering program.

Cycle 2 week 5- blogging in schools

Schools are using blogs as many differnt reasons. But one similar reason they aare using blogging is beacause they want the kids to get a better understanding on there work. Also fr like notes that they had took during class they can put them on the website for the kids to get later if they didnt in class. Theu also use it for the kids to answer questions after reading a paragraph or somthing. That is how schools are using blogging in there schools.
An idea that i find for is to read a paragraph or more and than answerind questions after you read the parapgrha. That is to see if you know what we are learinig about in the class. It is also so you wont be behind the rest of the class. Thats one idea i had found.
An idea i had found was that the teacher can type the notes on the webstie for us to get later. That can help us learn better in class instead of worrinig about notes while the teacher is talking. It also help ue get a better understanding on tyhe science work we are doing. That is what my idead for us to do in class for blogging.

Cycle 2 week 5-my blogging

The technology we use influnce me by heloing me understand aliltile bit better on what we are learning in class. It also helps me for what i need to work on so i can learn what i need to learn for science. It also help me with what aother people say for there blogs just incase i missed somthing in what i sayed. This technology we use is good at times and also bad at somtimes to. But other than that the tchnology is good.
Blogging did kind of imporved my writing at times. It helped me understand thimgs better on what i need to work on. By people commiting on my work helps me know what i need to work on. Blogging made me think about what i am writing when im writing and before i write. That is how blogging improved my writing.
Blogging helped me on the NJASK because of all the blogs we did so we can get a better understanding on what we are learning. Blogging was a big help because of the commints people gave me on my work. Also what the other people was saying on there blogs helped me think on the information. Bloggind improved my thinking skills, my writing, and my planning on what i am going to write about. yhat is what bloggind help me on the NJASK.
Yes the technology connected me to others on the gmail. By the technology doing that helped me comunicat with peolpe on what i needed help with on science. Also because of how we helped each other with the work we needed help with so we can past the class and the NJASK. That is hhowthe technology connected me on gmail.com